Going to Rotorua
On Thursday the 29th of september,my grandparents and I went to Rotorua to get my cousin for the holidays.
I had to get up at 7.00am so I could get ready and have breakfast.At 9.00 we had to leave to pick up my cousin because he was waiting for us to pick him up. We got there at about 11.00. After we picked we had a kai.
After we had a kai we went shopping and I got some clothes because I really needed some more clothes with the money I got from my mum for an early birthday present and I got some more clothes from my grandparents for another birthday present, my favorite shirt would be the white one with a black sleeve. My birthday was on the 6th of october on Thursday.
When we finished our shopping we went for a walk around to see if we needed and we got some groceries. We got a few other things too. The presents that I got from my grandparents was a black shirt with a pocket on it and some black Chinos for school.
After doing lot’s of things and travelling along way it finally came to an end and we finally went home. I wanted to go home because I had big day and was really tired.
Herewini Rata
I noticed that you had your birthday the same day as Jack in my class. You used paragraphs well in your writing and remembered capital letters at the start of a sentence. from Nate
ReplyDeleteI really liked your recount about you and your cousin. I liked your short paragraphs, they helped me to read it.
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